I recenlty saw Vivian Kirkfields contest to tell a tale in 50 words. FIFTY WRODS!!
Of course, I had to try! I took off for a run thinking about it and saw a hummingbird on a tree. So I started out with that image. Soon the hummingbird image got replaced by a more macabre one. I had recently read about a Blue Tit bird that had been eaten alive by a Venus Flytrap plant. Yeah, I went to dark places! So that became the inspiration for my 50 word story. Here it is. And here’s the real story.
SNEAK ATTACK
Blue Tit’s hungry for a treat.
Berries..seeds.. What should he eat?…
TWEEET..
Insect floats on Venus bloom.
Blue Tit spots it, in he zooms!
VROOM!
Deeper, darker – furious flaps,
Somethings wrong – is this a trap?
CRAP!
Didn’t expect this sneak attack;
Blue Tit’s turned into a snack.
SMACK!